Dear Mr. Sampad,
I am writing this letter to express my utter disappointment that for the last couple of days you are parking your personal car in my allotted place, causing severe inconvenience for me. Let me explain the issue for your better understanding.
As I work in far-flung suburb, I usually set off to my workplace in the wee hours and get back to home later in the evening when almost all the car owners of our community arrive at our block and place their car in the designated slot. However, unfortunately, these days, I could not find my one empty because almost every day your Nissan Xtrail car occupies the place. Therefore, I am encountered with severe difficulty to park my personal vehicle as traffic department of Danforth is cracking down on the wrong-parked vehicles. To discuss this issue, I have tried to communicate verbally with you but due to my unusual work-schedule, I was unable to meet your convenient time.
In this circumstance, I would like to sincerely request you to park your vehicle in a proper allotted area which will help to alleviate my harassment to place my car on the main street.
I am expecting kind cooperation in this regard.
Yours sincerely
A T M Jakir Alam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79716981132 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91371631959 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650943396226 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5356535131 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117626087057 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583094140293 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429309690337 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640218254277 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401796634881 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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