A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Meeraj,
How are you? Hope you are doing well. I am lucky enough to enjoy my vacation peacefully without bothering about my house and my pet as you would be looking after it.
I am going to London, UK along with my childhood buddies to spend some quality time together. Moreover, you can contact me on my phone 905-641-3036, I guess you already have it saved on your contact list. However, if I am not reachable you could preferably call Tina on 905-641-3938.
Since, you haven't met my pet. There might me already many thoughts running about it. Trust me it's the most adorable and friendly dog that you have been come across, though its naughty sometimes. My dog name is Oreo. You can feed him twice a day and take him for a morning walk , However evening walk is also fine with him.
As i won't be there for a week. A few household works are to be done. First of all, you may have to dump the week's garbage in the backyard compost. In addition to it you can water the plants alternative days. I would be returning on 25 Sep the tuesday.
I wish you would be comfortable in my home.
With Love,
Bhavana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...act list. However, if I am not reachable you could preferably call Tina on 905-64...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...referably call Tina on 905-641-3938. Since, you havent met my pet. There might me ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...all Tina on 905-641-3938. Since, you havent met my pet. There might me already many...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...any thoughts running about it. Trust me its the most adorable and friendly dog that...
^^^
Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ce a day and take him for a morning walk , However evening walk is also fine with ...
^^
Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hold works are to be done. First of all, you may have to dump the weeks garbage i...
^^
Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'weeks'' or 'week's'?
Suggestion: weeks'; week's
...First of all, you may have to dump the weeks garbage in the backyard compost. In add...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, i guess, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42307692308 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4031430927 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8652166684 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.1111111111 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5555555556 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 4.34317383033 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197674366848 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575901560283 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473941270018 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104697549496 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382141027467 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.17 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.