A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear James,
First of all, I want to thank you for agreeing to watch my house, while I’m on my vacation. I think will do your best taking care of my home. I will be on my trip to France for the all week long and if there is an emergency you can call me on my second number which I wrote on the note in the dining room.
I want also say a few words about my cat which you’ll need to feed three times per day. There is no need to buy something in shop. Just find the box with fodder in the second drawer in the kitchen. I believe you are totally aware how to feed a cat since you have one too.
I also want to ask you to check an email container for new mails and water my flowers which are stand in the kitchen on the windowsill. And one more thing. Don’t leave windows open, there are many burglaries in our district, I don’t anything being stolen.
Your friend, Max.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ote on the note in the dining room. I want also say a few words about my cat ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'i think', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224880382775 0.220444632235 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.157894736842 0.167888034529 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0430622009569 0.0606518309736 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0239234449761 0.0506257000042 47% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.124401913876 0.118615021944 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105263157895 0.107062808482 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0191387559809 0.041066498444 47% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.13986656725 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0382775119617 0.0385302599488 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0717703349282 0.0714148451538 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143540669856 0.0191574576366 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0191387559809 0.00930345855455 206% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 899.0 1141.60824742 79% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.134020619 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10795454545 5.53046319177 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.181818181818 0.284621296913 64% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.119318181818 0.211203875043 56% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0795454545455 0.133321485273 60% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0568181818182 0.0843313296314 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13986656725 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.622163163488 101% => OK
Word variations: 60.5453801511 62.8969750728 96% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.4300151701 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6721759688 44.7399317507 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7272727273 90.9928171075 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.4300151701 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 0.613754768223 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 27.9318181818 37.5504026743 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.140625 1.13073093955 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277009574865 0.331212695627 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0676338797031 0.0927372745006 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0476339949294 0.0736520305886 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.501347106739 0.579516596996 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152061037431 0.180689518051 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117951943686 0.122183219658 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725781709463 0.0765303033291 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.27556623569 0.211926503985 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0221075726437 0.0737400523855 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178187877108 0.203819188451 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182632948792 0.067151250289 27% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.45360824742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 1.03092783505 291% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.