Dear Clary,
Hope to find you in pink of your health.I am so happy to hear about your engagement. Congratulations! for the new start of life. I am writing to apologise my absence in your engagement party.
However, I had almost finished shopping for the dress and accessories I supposed to wear to be a part in your happiness.I was so excited to meet you and your fiancee and was also looking forward to meet all of our college friends there in your function. If I were there ,we would have plethora of talks and replenish memories of our college days.But,in the last moment my boss nominated me for a training abroad; it was much awaited opportunity for me as It could boost my career and hike my salary too.
Nevertheless, I have arranged for a compensation for my absence in your party.I am throwing a party to all my dear college buddies;and that too at our favorite old spot "The Chings". You especially have to come with your soulmate.we will have a fantastic time together.
Hope to meet you soon.
Warm wishes ,
Chhavi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...Hope to find you in pink of your health.I am so happy to hear about your engageme...
^
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...about your engagement. Congratulations! for the new start of life. I am writing to ...
^^^
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... to wear to be a part in your happiness.I was so excited to meet you and your fia...
^
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...ur fiancee and was also looking forward to meet all of our college friends there in you...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... there in your function. If I were there ,we would have plethora of talks and repl...
^^
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... replenish memories of our college days.But,in the last moment my boss nominated me...
^^^
Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...plenish memories of our college days.But,in the last moment my boss nominated me fo...
^^^
Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...mpensation for my absence in your party.I am throwing a party to all my dear coll...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... Hope to meet you soon. Warm wishes , Chhavi
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67934782609 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87685405647 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614130434783 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.9146612023 44.8134815571 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232280582226 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09975712666 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602783136715 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160335686915 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230880192828 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.