IELTS General Training Writing Task 1 Work is being done on the street where you live The noise is disturbing you Write a letter of complaint to your local council In your letter A Introduce yourself B Explain what the problem is C Suggest solutions to th

Dear Officer,

I am VJT, resident of 224 number bunglow at Hill road. Since i am residing, i didn't have any complaint from municipal authority. All services catered by your department officers are appreciable. However, i am writing this letter to bring an issue into your notice of loud noise in our area .

There is a construction work is in progress on our road side for water pipe line repairing. The work is going on 24 hours a day and due to that there is a huge noise disturbance occurring and we are not even able to sleep properly. We have small kids at home and their studies are also getting affected due to this loud and annoying sound. I have asked workers to stop their work in night hours but they told that they have orders to finish the work as soon as possible.

I suggest you to please ask workers to limit their work timing between 9:00 am to 7:00 pm, so that we would be able to live our life peacefully without any disturbance. Copy of this letter is also marked to the higher authorities in your department for faster resolution of this issue. We would be obliged if you personally take care of this problem and update us.

I'll be waiting to hear from you soon.

Yours faithfully
VJT

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...to your notice of loud noise in our area . There is a construction work is in p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48878923767 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4455771133 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2215675483 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203235423047 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687162955205 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481015591329 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113911589358 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398186072853 0.0580467560999 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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