Dear sir or madam
I am writing this letter to you to accord my opinion on your decision of spending money either on juvenile sports centre or organize two music concerts.
First of all, If you spend money on sports centre, it will be beneficial for the local children. There are no basic sports facilities for them in this area. If they get it through you then they will perform their abilities and get achievements under your advertisements which will also useful for you to get name and fame. It also encourage more children towards the sports.
On the other hand, if you arrange two live concerts, it will helpful to all community public. Many people get encouraged by such events and like to participate in this event. Also, it put example in society to do this types of activity so other companies will inspire to arrange such events.
According to my view, both of your plans having merits so I would like to suggest you to give equal importance to both. It will prove useful for community as well as your company.
I would like to thank you for this great work.
Yours Sincerely
Manish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir or madam I am writing this letter to you to accor...
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...There are no basic sports facilities for them in this area. If they get it throug...
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...u then they will perform their abilities and get achievements under your adverti...
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...rm their abilities and get achievements under your advertisements which will als...
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...ncerts, it will helpful to all community public. Many people get encouraged by su...
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...ire to arrange such events. According to my view, both of your plans having m...
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...e such events. According to my view, both of your plans having merits so I wo...
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... for this great work. Yours Sincerely Manish
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, well, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69387755102 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3995001562 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617346938776 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1887246261 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217873385744 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871601467779 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667756665298 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120360399965 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544993360981 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.