Dear James and Suzi,
I hope both of you are doing well. I am very pleased to receive your letter and photos of the holiday along with it as they came out be really amazing and indeed reminded me of the great time that I spent with you people. In fact, I am extremely thankful to both of you for letting me stay at your house and also to spare your precious time to show me all the incredible monuments and places there.
I am glad to tell you that it was one of the best holidays of my life and I will invariably cherish it's memories forever. Though, I wanted to write you before as well but deplorably a lot of work at my office was pending which took immense time for me to finish it. However, now I am absolutely free and so would like to invite both of you to visit here and stay with me at my home. I am eager to explore some of the beautiful places near by with you people.
Looking forward to meeting both of you soon,
Best wishes,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...th me at my home. I am eager to explore some of the beautiful places near by with you peopl...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...to explore some of the beautiful places near by with you people. Looking forward to ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10638297872 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11878468202 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7955715654 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313059007443 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133906859649 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558287241411 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152184169897 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113560844176 0.0580467560999 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.