Dear Rohan,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness.
I know that I had not kept my promise on coming to your place last Friday evening. So, I am writing this letter to express my reason for not meeting you.
I came to your town for a business trip. My company organized my stay in Radisson Hotel since we had booked a conference room in the hotel. I informed you that I'll be coming to meet you after finishing my work since we have made dinner reservations at club Skyhigh. Due to my busy schedule, I wasn't able to keep my promise and I forgot to remind you for canceling the dinner plan. I am sorry for not informing you earlier about not coming to the dinner.
The reason I couldn't come for dinner is due to the final paperwork that needed to submit on the same day. The preparation of my documentation work took my all free time on that evening. So, I was unable to come to the Sky high club as well as not informing you about rescheduling our dinner plan. I know you have kept waited for me on that day since I received your letter after coming back to my home. I am extremely sorry for my actions, and I hope you will understand the situation I was dealing with in my work.
Besides, I'll be coming next month to finalize the new deal with my client to your city. This time I won't be disappointing you like that last mistake of not coming to meet you. I'm planning to make reservations at Club Sky high on the first week of Saturday next month.
I am hoping for you to join me on the same day.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, so, well, mind you, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 32.9175257732 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 301.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14617940199 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31070705957 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458471760797 0.622605031667 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 301.0 16.3608247423 1840% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1248.0 76.5299724578 1631% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 301.0 16.8248392259 1789% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 46.0 4.34317383033 1059% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263892764762 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.263892764762 0.0766984524023 344% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179272989941 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284381245546 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 148.6 8.37731958763 1774% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -208.66 70.7449484536 -295% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 117.1 7.45979381443 1570% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.27 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.45 7.59969072165 269% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 122.4 8.54432989691 1433% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 149.0 8.15463917526 1827% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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