Dear sir/madam,
I am writing this latter to express our disappointment towards the idea of constructing modern building in the place of our ancient structure, which have been established by our forefathers. All community of society are disagree with the idea of manufacturing advanced building.
However, i mentioned earlier that this property belongs to our history. So, in the remembrance of ancestor we will not let this structure destroy you by making any software company. All in all, We have come up with new plan about how to sustain this place without taking any help from the municipality. We may announce this place as a historical museum for tourist and we can keep entry tickets to visit. Likewise, we can collect fund to renovate this building as well as we can preserve our ancient thing also.
To sum up with, please look in to the matter carefully and we hope to get a positive response from your side.
Thanking you,
Yours Sincerely,
Lily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... disagree with the idea of manufacturing advanced building. However, i men...
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...of manufacturing advanced building. However, i mentioned earlier that this p...
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...ing advanced building. However, i mentioned earlier that this property be...
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...n keep entry tickets to visit. Likewise, we can collect fund to renovate this bui...
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...n collect fund to renovate this building as well as we can preserve our ancient t...
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...ll as we can preserve our ancient thing also. To sum up with, please look in ...
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... a positive response from your side. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, L...
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...se from your side. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Lily
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... Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Lily
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...you, Yours Sincerely, Lily
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, likewise, look, may, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01840490798 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80792660245 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674846625767 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9898978302 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8888888889 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0918322768484 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385286426429 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030164954916 0.0603063233224 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398478391392 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238853728402 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.