Dear Ms/Mr
I am writing this to inform you that I do not tend to be a member of the local club any more.
I became a member of this club about a couple of years ago. At first, I was an ordinary member of the club that pay mere five hundred dollars yearly. Afterwards, in the second year, I turned to silver membership for one thousand annually.
During these two years, I took advantage of handicraft training workshop that was concentrated on the local works. The museums and local tours were really impressive and indeed contribute to comprehension of the cultural and customs of our indigenous generation, not to say about cooking courses and so on.
Sadly enough, I am urged to cancel my membership since I could get a precious master's degree scholarship in mechanical engineering and I have to leave the city. Although I am very pleased with my achievement in education, I am extremely unhappy with respect to leaving and not being a member of the club.
I hope to see you and have another chance of being a member of the local club in the close future.
Yours faithfully
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
... cancel my membership since I could get a precious masters degree scholarship in mechanica...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the close future. Yours faithfully Mark
^^^^^
Line 15, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ose future. Yours faithfully Mark
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, second, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67692307692 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70862454814 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605128205128 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8283754894 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258459546481 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933515277789 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764738250349 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141959947315 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891795262995 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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