People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter,•Describe the problem.•Explain how that is affecting people.•Say what the company should do to help.

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People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter,
• Describe the problem.
• Explain how that is affecting people.
• Say what the company should do to help.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to lodge a formal complaint regarding the slow internet connectivity in my area. In fact, there are more than fifty households, who have been facing this problem for two weeks. I contacted your customer care team but the problem has not been rectified until now.

Let me explain you in more detail. For the past couple of weeks, the internet connectivity had been intermittent, getting disconnected frequently. I restarted the modem multiple time but the issue seems to be elsewhere. Due to the poor connectivity of the internet, most people in my area are unable to watch online movies and live news. Moreover, home-working people are unable to perform their job related activities.

I would request you to send your technician to my residence immediately and arrange for an alternate broadband connection until the issue is resolved fully.

I hope to hearing from you soon with a prompt action.

Yours sincerely
Steve Johnson

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83273277949 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7125 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.379541976 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5454545455 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155137745333 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540532676016 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310050452807 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747663716568 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473946648143 0.0580467560999 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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