A pet belonging to a friend of yours recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter include :
• Your condolences.
• What kind of animal it was.
• Something you think will raise your friend’s spirits.
Dear Judy,
how are you? Hope you and your family are doing well.
i’m writing this letter to express how grieved i’m by the loss of your precious pet, max.
max, or Maxi as I was used to calling him, was one of a kind, and I had shared with him extremely special moments. max was so energetic, friendly and he was always there for you in happiness and sorrow. I can’t forget him setting up all night when your baby girl was sick to check on her. We were all lucky to have such obedient pet in our lives.
I know that there aren't enough words can make you come to terms with your loss, but i’m quite sure that if he had been here, he would have been happy to see you moving on in your life. so please get better soon.
Take care of yourself and your family.
Your friend,
Randa.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Judy, how are you? Hope you and your family ar...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
...e you and your family are doing well. i'm writing this letter to express how gr...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m by the loss of your precious pet, max. max, or Maxi as I was used to calling hi...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Max
...red with him extremely special moments. max was so energetic, friendly and he was a...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...t pet in our lives. I know that there arent enough words can make you come to terms...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...appy to see you moving on in your life. so please get better soon. Take care of ...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yourself and your family. Your friend, Randa.
^^^
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your family. Your friend, Randa.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 659.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27922077922 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.92314159757 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707792207792 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6721193972 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.9090909091 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369274225535 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147646118436 0.0766984524023 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122646086309 0.0603063233224 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190800021311 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351824770952 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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