Dear Alex,
Hope this letter finds you in the pinkest of health. Heartiest congratulations to you on achieving the best acclaimed international food critic. I have learn't that you are publishing a new book on international cuisines, Hence I'm writing to you regarding the same.
Since ur magazine is going to cover international dishes, I was hoping if you can add one of our countries favourite delicacies. Crispy Pata. It's a pork dish that is served mainly on festive occasions like Christmas, Easter, Birthday's etc. Whole meat is braised in such a way the skin of the pork turns crispier nd the meat beneath is succulent nd juicy, its served with a spicy tangy vinaigrette sauce. It's an all time favourite in our part of the world and it's a must try for the food loving people. I vouch this is an excellent recipe to add in your pelthora of recipes. My mouth is watering as i write about it.
I would be obliged if you add this in your upcoming publication. It's definitely a crowd pleaser. You have tried it too and i still remember you going gaga over it. Hope you can find a way to make ink to pen for this.
Your's Faithfully,
Nelson Cardonza.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Alex, Hope this letter finds you in the pinkes...
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Suggestion: The Heartiest
...ter finds you in the pinkest of health. Heartiest congratulations to you on achieving the...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...w book on international cuisines, Hence Im writing to you regarding the same. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Im writing to you regarding the same. Since ur magazine is go...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ries favourite delicacies. Crispy Pata. Its a pork dish that is served mainly on fe...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...d with a spicy tangy vinaigrette sauce. Its an all time favourite in our part of th...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... favourite in our part of the world and its a must try for the food loving people. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ora of recipes. My mouth is watering as i write about it. I would...
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Suggestion:
...th is watering as i write about it. I would be obliged if you add this in yo...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... add this in your upcoming publication. Its definitely a crowd pleaser. You have tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74387429629 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639423076923 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2612899545 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19110755106 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634876052312 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502579030458 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120165126965 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229424008638 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.