The system used for rubbish garbage collection in your local area is not working properly This is causing problems for you and your neighbours Write a letter to the local council In your letter describe how the rubbish collection system is not working pro

Dear Sir,

I am resident of Baker street 221 B, London and writing this letter on behalf of all residents of my locality. Recently, from past one month, we are facing severe discomfort because of gross mismanagement by rubbish collection team and would like your immediate action to resolve the problem.
In connection to the situation, the garbage vehicles are not giving regular visit to our area for collecting garbage and as a result, air is contaminated with rotten smell causing sick to our children. Adding to this, ghastly winds carrying waste particles into our houses, worsening the conditions.
On best interest of community members, I request you to make transportation arrangements for shifting piled-up garbage to dump-yard. If necessary, kindly collect council-tax to improve the services and for long run, it is recommended to have monitoring schedule for prompt implementation. Such measurements, assure people, garbage collection in timely manner.

Your swift action is highly solicited.

Yours faithfully,
Frost.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59748427673 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0709475283 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.77358490566 0.622605031667 124% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7967917432 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296782376911 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993619287231 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376615576848 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135882615068 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281771468264 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 8.71597938144 171% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.