The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter •Describe how the rubbish collection system is not workin

Dear Council,

I am writing this letter to address you the issue of garbage collection system which is not working properly since last two weeks. I am really disheartened by the quality of work by the newer system.

Let me explain you the situation how the rubbish collectors are not performing as expected which is drastically effecting me and my neighbourhood? Last month, there was a new system appointed to the society replacing the previous ones by the municipality.

Firstly, They don't look professionals and don't cover the entire society while collecting the waste knowing the fact that the garbage will create a huge pollution and will spread on the roads due to rain. Sometimes, they don't bother to come to collect the rubbish. Therefore, We are facing a lot of issues, which require priority of your attention.

In conclusion, after society meeting, we appeal municipality to hire the previous garbage collector organisation to avoid the damage which is happening to our health everyday. Would you mind setting up a meeting with them so that we can strongly oppose the newer ones on the base facts and make our society a better place to live.

Many Thanks,
Shahin

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... by the municipality. Firstly, They dont look professionals and dont cover the e...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rstly, They dont look professionals and dont cover the entire society while collecti...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... the roads due to rain. Sometimes, they dont bother to come to collect the rubbish. ...
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Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...damage which is happening to our health everyday. Would you mind setting up a meeting wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, really, so, therefore, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02525252525 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76447226563 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656565656566 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0237221569 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20801443323 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074160305249 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702432234076 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114989318804 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769102949003 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.