There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that money is the main reason.
Do you agree or disagree?
A person is motivated to work for one corporation by different reasons. It is argued that the primary one is salary. This essay totally agrees with this statement because when one person has high salary, he or she has power in the company and high living standard.
A person with high payment is the one who plays an important role in his or her company. Managers and supervisors who usually have more payment than others are one of the most powerful people in the company. Whenever they have power, they do not want to leave their positions because they are worry that they may not get the same one in another company. For example, a survey which conducted in 10 construction companies in Toronto showed that although 50% of workers left the company in 2017, only 5% of managers moved to other companies.
Another main reason is that high salary can afford better living standard. Every people are working to earn money for their lives. When someone has high income, that person will live in a higher standard of life that he or she does not want to step down a lower one. Therefore, that person has more passion to keep his or her position in the company. For instance, I moved from a small room in town to a condo in city when my husband got my offer as a supervisor in his company. Because we do not want to move back that room, he has been working with all of his passion every day to stay in the same company with the same position.
In conclusion, the main reason of staying in the same company is money because high income means higher living standard and higher power in a corporation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: I_AM_WORRY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worried'?
Suggestion: worried
... leave their positions because they are worry that they may not get the same one in a...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...n reason is that high salary can afford better living standard. Every people are worki...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...lary can afford better living standard. Every people are working to earn money for th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.03092783505 462% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 292.0 206.0 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47945205479 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32049295596 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503424657534 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5802641568 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232333895599 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841114162165 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602719366172 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147183781981 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538545913925 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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