Dear Sir,
I am Satpreet Singh resident of New Town Hall area and I writing this letter on the behalf of New Town hall residence association to bring an issue to your notice, which we are facing for the last week.
Let me explain the problem in the detail. As you might be aware that last month city council has issued grant to construct new concrete road in New Town Hall area and the budget was released for Road no. 10. However, contractor dumped all the constraction material to the site but so far no work has been started and due to this it become all mot impossible for nearest residents to move out for their houses.
I would like to request you that please look this matter in an urgent basis. Because, monsoon is predicted at the month end, and in case the road work would not completed, rain might delay the constraction work two months util the winter season.
Hope you will take appropriate action on this problem as soon as possible. I have attached the photograph of the site for your reference.
Yours faithfully,
Satpreet Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...ingh resident of New Town Hall area and I writing this letter on the behalf of Ne...
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Line 4, column 333, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ork has been started and due to this it become all mot impossible for nearest resident...
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Line 6, column 162, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'complete'
Suggestion: complete
...nd, and in case the road work would not completed, rain might delay the constraction work...
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Line 6, column 228, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...y the constraction work two months util the winter season. Hope you will take appropriate acti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61904761905 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37630351558 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645502645503 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7765760661 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156221756522 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718771755683 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319640922592 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899378257243 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027261160088 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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