A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
- What suitcase and when dud he/she borrow it?
- Why do you need it back?
- What should he/she do about it?
Dear Mike,
How have you been?. it has been a long time since we last met. I am writing in regards to remind you to return a suitcase which you borrowed from me. I believe you borrowed the suitcase last year as you were planning for a vacation to Bangkok. To elucidate the suitcase is blue in colour and is made of carbon fibre which makes it very light while travelling. it has travel stickers all over it which enhance its attractive look additionally it has shining robust steel handles which differentiate it from the other suitcases. I hope the suitcase served you well during your vacation due to its large capacity.
As I am travelling to Indonesia next month along with Jane for a holiday thus I would need this suitcase. due to its large capacity, I can carry some heavy items in it apart from this the suitcase is airline checkable so that would save us from a lot of unnecessary hassles at the airport.
I request you to return the suitcase possibly by this weekend as I need to start some packing and bring Jane along it would be a great opportunity to meet her too.
I look forward to your response at the earliest.
Yours loving
Danny
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 21, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
Dear Mike, How have you been?. it has been a long time since we last met....
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Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ng time since we last met. I am writing in regards to remind you to return a suitcase which y...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: blue
...o Bangkok. To elucidate the suitcase is blue in colour and is made of carbon fibre which makes...
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Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...h makes it very light while travelling. it has travel stickers all over it which e...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...oliday thus I would need this suitcase. due to its large capacity, I can carry some...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, well, while, apart from, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52606635071 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48927530485 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597156398104 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4603024518 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5833333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168809552557 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632898502706 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654502207542 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818554029498 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718526424464 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.