Work is being done on the street where you live The noise is disturbing you Write a letter of complaint to your local council In your letter Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest a solution to the problem

Essay topics:

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.

Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:

Introduce yourself.

Explain what the problem is.

Suggest a solution to the problem.

Dear Sir / Madame,

I am writing this letter in regards to the construction going on the street near my house. The noise has become a problem.

My name is Robert Wilson, I live next to the street where the construction is going on. I am a senior member of the community so, it is my responsibility to inform you about my concerns due to this construction site noise.

I have had sleepless nights as there are continuous work shifts on the streets and the noise of these big machines does not let me sleep. Moreover, I can also hear people talking and lights for construction are so bright that even after drawing the curtains still light peeps in my bedroom.

I know it is important to finish this work and it is for our benefit but I request you to stop the work at night. You can instead increase the manpower and start early in the morning and can also have twelve-hour shifts. It will be really helpful.

I will look forward to your response.

Yours faithfully,

Robert Wilson.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...r / Madame, I am writing this letter in regards to the construction going on the street ne...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, Robert Wilson.
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, really, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62011173184 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59245700704 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642458100559 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3688282691 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1818181818 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200799489303 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782907981033 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463530094974 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102384321406 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509420547995 0.0580467560999 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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