Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council.•Introduce yourself•Explain what the problem is•Suggest solutions

Essay topics:

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council.
• Introduce yourself
• Explain what the problem is
• Suggest solutions

Dear Sir,
I am writing to register a complaint about disturbance that cause by a street work.

My name is Kajal Desai and I am a resident of India Colony. My House number is 1 which is located next to Main Street.
First of all, people who are working to repair a damaged road needs to use digger for digging and drilling, and this noise has spilled over into my house. So, study is disturbing and I am not able to concentrate. Moreover, contractor continue this work in night also. As a result of this, residents are unable to get deep sleep.

With respect to these problems, contractor should increase manpower. If more people work to repair damaged road transport, more early they can finish their work. Additionally, instead of working 24 hours, they should fix their working hours. So that, locals can get enough sleep and pupils can focus on their study.

I would be grateful if you respond at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,

Kajal Desai

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
...ho are working to repair a damaged road needs to use digger for digging and drilling,...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... contractor continue this work in night also. As a result of this, residents are una...
^^^^
Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence. Yours sincerely, Kajal Desai
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, as a result, first of all, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82142857143 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5370273819 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.702380952381 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3836772828 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3076923077 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9230769231 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165708014876 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536364148627 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535599144296 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102863805648 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687833965363 0.0580467560999 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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