Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring it to your attention regarding a complain about the dogs in our neighbourhood which are owned and controlled by some very young boys and can cause hazardous situations as these dogs are not controlled properly. It might create perilous situations for those around - knowingly or unknowingly.
I have experienced that some teenagers are letting their dogs move out freely in our area and they are unaware of the danger of this. For instance, yesterday, we had a very fatal situation happened when kid was playing with the dog, as result who is struggling now for her life. Recently, we came to know that dogs did not immunise as well and adolescence has to responsible for this serious matter.
I therefore request you to take a severe actions against those careless owners of dogs. The more daunting issue is that some teenagers often own dogs for show off, do not care to vaccinate those dogs and let them run wildly. Seems like they do no know or care about the severity of the situation it can turn up to.
Anticipating your response and support very urgently.
Yours sincerely,
Peter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...to bring it to your attention regarding a complain about the dogs in our neighbourhood whi...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
... therefore request you to take a severe actions against those careless owners of dogs....
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u to take a severe actions against those careless owners of dogs. The more daunti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83756345178 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62987804756 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675126903553 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.400662248 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295110517239 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868512547083 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088654205429 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144466721157 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978166027248 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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