Dear Mike,
I hope you are doing good. How is your business running? It’s been so long since we have met each other and I missed you. So, I would like to plan a trip with you for the coming long weekend. It will definitely a good pause from our busy lives and spend some time with the nature.
We can go to Miami as both of us like beaches. Also, we can explore water sports that are present in the resort. I can book the flight tickets for both of us for a five-day trip. I hope you can take care of the stay during the trip.
If you are planning to get your family along with you to the trip, do let me know. We worked hard all these long and a break would rejuvenate us. I would also check with my spouse and kids and let you know regarding their presence in the trip.
I can’t wait to hear from you.
Your friend,
Venkata Saikiran Kattekola.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09467455621 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93075390739 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644970414201 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0704117689 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.4285714286 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0714285714 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250137245969 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09009399572 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783107283597 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128927598557 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782384271784 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.9 8.37731958763 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.55 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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