Dear Leena,
Hopefully, everybody is doing well at home.
Thanks a million for your letter. I can not tell you how much I am delighted to hear about your visit to India next week.
Recently, I shifted to Bangalore due to a new job in the company. Had I not moved here, I would have never known about its scenic beauty. It is a beautiful city, where you can explore multiple tourist places and hill stations within reach of 5km to 10 km. Unlikely to my native place where it used to take us three to four days to reach hill stations. Is it not exciting?
I have bought a new flat near to the office. It is in a Vijaya Bank Layout, Bangalore. My house is next to the Forum mall, where we can explore new releases and do lots of shopping. Without having a single doubt, you are going to stay with me.
As I informed you earlier, Bangalore's weather is better than the other cities. However, it turns a bit colder in October and November months. Therefore, I would recommend you to carry light warm clothes when you visit here.
Since it is your first time in Bangalore, I will show you some famous tourist places here. There, we can explore multiple options ranging from river rafting, mountain trekking, bungee jumping to wild-life centuries.
I am impatiently waiting for your arrival!
Anika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntly waiting for your arrival! Anika
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54468085106 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40245083856 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646808510638 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2564410782 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.3333333333 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0555555556 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165701557493 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042190292035 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444608968005 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727779416317 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397891172418 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.16 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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