Dear Margaret,
I am constrained to write to you to highlight the issues that I am facing due to some small unintentional things that have been going on in your premises lately. Allow me to elaborate.
As you know, the house next door was lying vacant and it was a few days ago that I along with my wife as well as two children moved into this beautiful place that we now call our home. Let me introduce myself, I am a Social Worker, my wife works with HSBC Bank at 78th Street and my two children are in school. The younger one is 7 years of age and the elder one is 11 years of age.
The things have been going well for my family in the locality; however, my children are bothered by the placement of your dustbin which consists of wet waste. Some foul smell has been emanating from the said dustbin which has been a cumbersome problem to deal with for them. Their friends have started ignoring them and do not come to play with them anymore due to the foul smell.
I am sure that the issue is unintentional and can be resolved by identifying the nub of the issue. However, my wife and I are of the view that maybe you need to change the dustbin as it seems that the lid is broken and resultant of which the foul smell can escape from there. I hope that you will act on the advice and take prompt action. Further, I hope you will empathize with my situation and be welcoming towards your new neighbours.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Margaret, I am constrained to write to you to high...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I am a Social Worker, my wife works with HSBC Bank at 78th Street and my two chil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30291970803 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3126277499 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4457454234 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6923076923 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0866405023137 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027700332755 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243955886388 0.0603063233224 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543298538435 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192968553327 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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