Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is JOHN, I recently moved to New York from Chicago and am writing in connection with job advertisement of your restaurant. I am currently looking for a job here and would like to work in your restaurant.
I did Hotel Management coarse from a very prestigious college of New York " Will Smith College of Hotel Management" with good grades. Later, I did my internship of one year from one of the famous hotels, "The Park Avenue" located in downtown of New York city. After which, I also worked as an assistant manager in that same hotel for two years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...ntly moved to New York from Chicago and am writing in connection with job advertis...
^^
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nager in that same hotel for two years.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 501.0 937.175257732 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 104.0 206.0 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81730769231 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.19343686757 3.78020617076 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95439635801 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 127.690721649 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682692307692 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 155.7 290.88556701 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.9158820696 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0750948564652 0.216113520407 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052962016983 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675484121994 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772821073665 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683252271581 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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