Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter:– Explain why you are unhappy– Request a refund– Make arrangements to return the damaged item

Dear Sir,

The purpose of this letter is to complain about the iPhone I purchased from your shop yesterday. The iPhone has various problems and missing accessories. Therefore, I would like to request a reimbursement of full payment or replacing with the new one.

Accordingly, the iPhone box has missing headphone and the adapter for charging a device. Furthermore, the home button and the slide button on the left side of the iPhone for toggling between modes are not working. Most importantly, the screen of the iPhone is broken from the top right corner and has many scratches.

I am sorrowful with the purchased I had made from your shop. Therefore, I would like to request you to arrange a full refund which is seven hundred dollars plus Tax. Furthermore, as the iPhone is of my likeness and I always prefer using the iPhone. Therefore, I would consider replacement instead of reimbursement with a new piece.

You may courier replacement to the location enclosed with this envelope. Also, the defected iPhone.

I look forward to receiving a replacement, a newly packed iPhone from you soon.

Yours Faithfully,
Moses

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, look, may, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06914893617 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86588616854 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3787251443 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0714285714 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879138428467 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267942744969 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449171473502 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498040170822 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342897159527 0.0580467560999 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.