Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the decor of your restaurant 'colours' which I have visited last week with my friends.
My name is John and I am your frequent customer . The reason behind my regular visit is the scrumptious food you deliver and the unmatchable services you extend to us. Moreover , best part of your restaurant is the complimentary drinks that you offer on the entrance. Besides, prices of all the items are quite pocket friendly so we don't need to panic about Bill while digging on food. However, my recent experience was absolutely opposite as dim lights were making the ambiance more gloomy and depressed. More than that , colour of curtains send sitting area was highly dull and adding more to my melancholic mood. Additionally ,music was so loud and disturbing.
I would like you to install some colourful LED lights so it can enhance the beauty of the place and sofa covers should also be superseded by delightful and spectacular patterns. Most importantly , music should be soothing so it can make the environment lively. I hope my suggestions will help you.
thank you.
Yours sincerely,
John.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, moreover, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02051282051 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79693274083 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712820512821 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2702754291 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186085474192 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671916411802 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609493741941 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115628669412 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471735416407 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.