Dear Abhishek,
I hope you are doing well. Anyways, I am writing to inform you that I'll be traveling to Europe with my wife for the next two months to visit exotic destinations.
Since you are living in Germany for the past five years, you'll be experienced enough to share the list of wonderful places in Europe. Though I have made online reservations from the Make My Trip website. I booked a two-month couple holiday package that includes foods, night stays in five-star hotels and famous locations in Europe. The first two weeks of my travel destinations are Amsterdam, Berlin, Munich, and Croatia. In other weeks, I'll be going to Netherlands, Norway, Dublin, Cork, and Finland. Finally, the last week I'll be spending the time in Milan and Paris which is the best part of our package.
However, I am curious to learn about the new culture and traditions in these places where you'll better guide me to the breathtaking and sightseeing views in these well-known places. Also, I'll be seeing you in the first week of my trip as you live in Berlin.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon on this letter.
Best regards,
Shwatank
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...ing in Germany for the past five years, youll be experienced enough to share the list...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the list of wonderful places in Europe. Though I have made online reservations from th...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...n, Munich, and Croatia. In other weeks, Ill be going to Netherlands, Norway, Dublin...
^^^
Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...rk, and Finland. Finally, the last week Ill be spending the time in Milan and Paris...
^^^
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...re and traditions in these places where youll better guide me to the breathtaking and...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...views in these well-known places. Also, Ill be seeing you in the first week of my t...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, finally, first, however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78391959799 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55371327257 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64824120603 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6506317525 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18426639929 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617419184035 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635902338975 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130635541913 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533548955992 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...ing in Germany for the past five years, youll be experienced enough to share the list...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the list of wonderful places in Europe. Though I have made online reservations from th...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...n, Munich, and Croatia. In other weeks, Ill be going to Netherlands, Norway, Dublin...
^^^
Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...rk, and Finland. Finally, the last week Ill be spending the time in Milan and Paris...
^^^
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...re and traditions in these places where youll better guide me to the breathtaking and...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...views in these well-known places. Also, Ill be seeing you in the first week of my t...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, finally, first, however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78391959799 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55371327257 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64824120603 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6506317525 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18426639929 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617419184035 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635902338975 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130635541913 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533548955992 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.