Write a letter to your friend to recommend a book to read that you have read You should include Describe the book How it can help him her Where can he get it from

Hello John,

I hope you doing good mate. Lately, you have asked me to suggest a book to start a business, I hope you remember. Well, recently I have read a book called "Rich Dad and Poor Dad", and the author is Robert T Kiyosaki, about his life journey from poorer to rich. He has clearly explained how to start a business with zero balance in your account and to get rich. His story carries with bit emotional and inspiring. I have started invested in the right business with a low balance and been in profits since I ever read that book. I reckon you should read that book if you want to be a successful businessman, you can get it in any bookstores or an easy option to buy online, I have mention the book name up above at the start. I guess you share the experience once you read the book. Good luck John.

Regards
Nish

Votes
Average: 7.3 (2 votes)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...on the book name up above at the start. I guess you share the experience once you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, i guess, i reckon

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32911392405 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35575707823 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.757730751 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379038076063 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12601228793 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1142013773 0.0603063233224 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.384918431086 0.12726935374 302% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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