Write a letter to your friend from whom you borrowed something that accidentally broke. Please say
– Remind him/her, what have you borrowed
– Explain what happened
– What you will do about it
Dear Sara,
I hope you are doing fine. Unfortunately, I have a bad news for you. In fact, I am writing to inform you that the mathematical calculator, which I have borrowed from you last week, has been broken.
As you know, I was supposed to take an advanced calculator to the geometry exam and that was why I had asked for yours. I stayed up late the night before the exam and overslept the day after so I had to run a long distance from university's gate to the exam hall. While I was running, I collided with another student which was in the same predicament and fell on the ground on my backpack. Sorrowfully, the calculator took the hit and was entirely smashed.
I am extremely ashamed of not protecting the object better. Had I predicted this incident, I would have gone to bed earlier. The calculator condition is so bad that I am afraid the only way to salvage the situation is to replace the goods. I wanted to inform you that I have already ordered a mathematical calculator with the exact model from the same manufacturer online. It is supposed to be delivered in the weekend. I will bring the item to you as soon as I receive it.
Again, I would like to apologize for the accident and ask for your forgiveness.
Best wishes,
Behnaz
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| 2019-12-31 | bhanu Lingala | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'bad news'.
Suggestion: bad news
...u are doing fine. Unfortunately, I have a bad news for you. In fact, I am writing to infor...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, in fact, you know, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54347826087 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73349662168 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569565217391 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6065049211 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6666666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189101414822 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618489648435 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765615119943 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121081845535 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115812411741 0.0580467560999 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.