Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Rajan Mishra, I live in Cochin Municipality, Block 4 and street Number 5. And I am writing to inform you about the damage caused the road passing near to my home towards the school because of the heavy rain happened last month.
School going student’s trouble to walk through and heavy traffic caused due to the accumulation of water and mud. In addition to this, honking sounds of vehicle disturbs us a lot as they cannot move fast because of large holes in roads and throwing pebbles damaged the windows of my home. However, I understand that this road had reconstructed recently and the contractor has the obligation to maintain the road for 2 years and it has displayed in beginning of this road.
So, I do believe that you will take this concern in priority and solve this issue as fast as possible. Although, if contractor is not ready to do the maintenance our residential group will responsible to bear the expense of it but we need an immediate resolution for this issue.
Your faithfully,
Rajan
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75274725275 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70383828221 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5777557331 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.125 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149776527909 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677291244517 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559111101234 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786925593196 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242676198847 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75274725275 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70383828221 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5777557331 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.125 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149776527909 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677291244517 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559111101234 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786925593196 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242676198847 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.