Dear John,
I am writing to bring to your a significant error which is my computer restart it frequently till this morning so I caonnt finish any task with it, and I used my co-work's laptop to write this email to you.
The computer has been restarting since 9:00AM, I guranteed that I did not install any new software and the computer itself has regular tempurature when I touched it. I tried to turn it off during my break time but it did not work.
As you know, woking in marketing department, my task is connecting with people no matter external or internal, without computer I cannot send or receive any work task, especially emails. I could not do any work currently, it really struggling so please help me repaired this problems as soon as you can. Otherwise I would like a new one instead, even just for temporary period.
I am looking forward from you.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...y struggling so please help me repaired this problems as soon as you can. Otherwise ...
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Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...aired this problems as soon as you can. Otherwise I would like a new one instead, even ju...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64150943396 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57436372755 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704402515723 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8720929628 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141260117835 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502983731467 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404616841011 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794861585264 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323223353692 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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