Write a letter to your manger to nominate a person for best employee of the year award. Explain in your letter– Who is this person?– Why did you choose him/her?– What are the characteristics of a good employee?

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you with great pleasure in response to the notice that has been circulated today for employee of the year award nominations. I would like to submit a nominee for the same. Allow me to elaborate.

On the first place, I am really happy with the acts of management to come forward with such an initiative. In response, I would like to nominate Mr. Igor Mathew from the Human Resources Department. Further, I have a lot of reasons to come forward with the nomination for him. In addition, I have support of my other colleagues.

I decided to nominate him due to multiple reasons. Firstly, there is nobody who can question his dedication. Secondly, he keeps the company and their policies on high stature. He can be counted on at the time of need.

Furthermore, I feel like there are certain essential qualities that a good employee should possess and I do not shy away from admitting that Igor has all the qualities. Every employee to be categorized as a good employee should possess patience, commitment and must be loyal.

Finally, I am hopeful of Igor winning the award and making us all feel elated.

Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, really, second, secondly, so, i feel, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76699029126 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7234697004 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626213592233 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3222557685 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4666666667 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17786892098 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484173453226 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483266643411 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782282568596 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048125792498 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.