Writing task 1 (a letter)You recently met a couple who will be visiting your town. Write a letter to them and say– Suggest what to bring– Recommend where they should stay– What places they should visit

Dear James,

I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am very excited to know that you and your beloved wife Suzi are coming to Delhi next week for your winter vacation. Thus, I would like to give you some advice to make this trip of yours the best of all. Firstly, it is quite chilling in the month of December here so please do not forget to pack your winter clothes as the temperature sometime drops up to -3 degree Celsius.

Secondly, it would be better to stay in a Hotel which is located in South Delhi because this part of the city is much safer than other places. Moreover, it will be feasible for you to reach all the popular tourist destinations from here such as Qutub Minar and Humanu's Tomb. Hence, I believe you must check-in in the "Raj Mahal" Hotel in Vasant Kunj, it is a very prestigious and cozy place to reside.

Lastly, you must also see some of the famous areas in Delhi other then the usual well known monuments like "Chandi Chowk" market. It is an incredible place for shopping and eating the authentic savoury food especially "Parathae wali gali" where you get delicious paratha.

I am looking forward to meet you soon.

Best Wishes,
James

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...to reside. Lastly, you must also see some of the famous areas in Delhi other then the us...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: OTHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'other than'?
Suggestion: other than
...o see some of the famous areas in Delhi other then the usual well known monuments like &ap...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...some of the famous areas in Delhi other then the usual well known monuments like &ap...
^^^^
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...icious paratha. I am looking forward to meet you soon. Best Wishes, James
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66046511628 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45614867345 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66511627907 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5872404594 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0909090909 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 4.34317383033 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108286132679 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400550201474 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225189428233 0.0603063233224 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603378685387 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228282322453 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.