Dear Mr Greg,
I am your new tenant Stanley staying in D/no 13, Linda Apartments. Recently, because of my new job in London, I moved to your accommodation after duly signing rent agreement. However, dilapidated condition of few furnitures prompted me to write this letter.
As you are aware, I am an accountant in Barclays bank and considered present opportunity as part of structural changes in company. As a result, I had to change my work location from New Delhi to London, after which I took your house for rent. Nevertheless, me and my family are facing troubles because of poor facilities in the flat which I intend to bring it your attention.
In our rental contract, clear conditions are stipulated for replacing old chairs and tables with new ones. Whereas, to our surprise, we found not even single new furniture. On the other hand, existing equipments and doors are infected with termites and rust. Clearly, this amounts to breach of our agreement and I request you to take immediate action to rectify the situation.
After explaining myself, it only sounds logical to ask you to comply the terms by replacing all existing furniture's. I recommend you to take a visit to the flat, accompanied by a carpenter, for estimating the total costs. Thus we can have clarity about action plan to be taken. Further, I know this is not part of contract, I request you to change windows curtain as they are also not in good condition.
Hope your positive response for my proposition and look forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Stanley.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... write this letter. As you are aware, I am an accountant in Barclays bank and ...
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Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s logical to ask you to comply the terms by replacing all existing furnitures. I ...
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Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...penter, for estimating the total costs. Thus we can have clarity about action plan t...
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Line 11, column 65, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...nse for my proposition and look forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Stanle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, whereas, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90566037736 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78973860952 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2045403038 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25888614435 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759415308829 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450557786872 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127977892377 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454124297976 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.