Dear Ms. Ferry,
I hope this letter of mine finds you in ravishing health. The purpose of my writing is in connection requirement of your kind reference regarding a job opportunity in Japan.
You are always an inspiration for me and as per your teaching, I am trying to achieve more in life. I have recently applied for a Japanese Multi National Company the "Tunisia" for the post of "Artificial Intelligence and Machine Engineer", but for the background verification, they are asking for a reference. I know you must be very happy after getting this information. As this will be my first job and could provide me a good exposer of latest technology and plethora of knowledge about the field of robotics.
In your reference letter, you need to put my name and the year of education that is 2015 to 2019, apart from that you can tell about in what areas I was good and can also mention the science award that I was able to win with under your guidance.
Your prompt help will be much appreciated. Thank you.
Your Sincerely,
Anna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...always an inspiration for me and as per your teaching, I am trying to achieve more i...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...job and could provide me a good exposer of latest technology and plethora of knowledge ab...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80434782609 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05247118582 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9087771324 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2222222222 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252352865876 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853181431024 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378684963897 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135204017493 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029002340003 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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