You are applying for a job and you need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former boss.
In your letter
• Describe the job you are applying for
• Say what you want to be included in the reference letter
• Request that your former boss send you the letter by the end of the week
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to inform that I will be applying for a job overseas and need a letter of reference on my experience as a supporting document for my application.
The position I am applying is for Senior Sales Specialist for a Satellite Services company. To elucidate the role is based in Dubai and involves techno-commercial support to the regional sales team. it also involves travelling within the Middle East region. On the reference letter, I request you to include a recommendation for this position and additionally indicate a list of projects in which I was directly interfacing with the customers and the key contributions in the successful completion of those projects.
As the deadline is approaching and I need to send this reference letter along with my curriculum vitae for this position I request you to send it by the end of this week on my mailing address 15 North Avenue Road Woodlands London.
I look forward to your response at the soonest.
Yours sincerely
Brian
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-03-22 | Kunal Bajaj | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...supporting document for my application. The position I am applying is for Senior...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ial support to the regional sales team. it also involves travelling within the Mid...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse at the soonest. Yours sincerely Brian
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92045454545 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07129471716 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.5853714799 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339058461304 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113232743925 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931477195288 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189114129916 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115446925323 0.0580467560999 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.