You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/ her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir,
Good day! I Maria Judith Parayno, got a new job on your company as a Manager, and about to start my work Next week on the exact date of March 25th of 2017. I write this letter because I will not be able to start my job as a manager on your company.
I know that I gone through all hardships in finding a job that suits to my profession and luckily with all of those hardships I get hired as a manager on one of the best and leading company in our country and that is your company. Now that I am already a certified employee of your company i do have some problems that i need to resolve first. Suddenly, our house got burned, so me and my family must rent a a temporary house for a month. While we are still renovating and working on our own house. I really do apologize for this inconvenient but after I resolved this problem, I think I can start my work on the date of April 1st of 2017. Due to I need some enough time to prepare and help my family to move our things.
Hoping for your kind consideration. For rescheduling my start date on your company.
Respectfully yours,
Maria Judith Parayno
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my job as a manager on your company. I know that I gone through all hardships ...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...dy a certified employee of your company i do have some problems that i need to re...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ur company i do have some problems that i need to resolve first. Suddenly, our ho...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...t burned, so me and my family must rent a a temporary house for a month. While we a...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t burned, so me and my family must rent a a temporary house for a month. While we...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...t burned, so me and my family must rent a a temporary house for a month. While we a...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, still, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20833333333 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44769967736 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550925925926 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9944175895 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6363636364 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206848451943 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875952079989 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080117219062 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181336527644 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721988989018 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.