You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to, because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In you letter:
Explain your situation
Describe your problems
Tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir,
I am bhanu Prakash, I recently got selected for a Software Engineer position in your company and my joining date is coming Monday i.e 22-Jan-2018. But due to some reasons, I would not be able to join.
I am not in a condition to travel, I am feeling so utter not joining the organization on-time, yesterday I met with an accident while going to an office and nearby people took me to hospital. The doctor had seen my situation and asked me to take rest as there have been 2 fractures on my right leg and operation has to be performed today. due to this problem, I require to take some gap.
Post-surgery, I will join back to work. I hope that I can join to project in 10 days, as the doctor also told it shouldn't take more than a week, so as I informed before my surgery is planned today at 10 am. Probably I will be joining back to the company after 10days from today.
Please consider my situation and looking forward to joining the company as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
bhanu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...nd operation has to be performed today. due to this problem, I require to take some...
^^^
Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
...d today. due to this problem, I require to take some gap. Post-surgery, I will join ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
... in 10 days, as the doctor also told it shouldnt take more than a week, so as I informed...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40425531915 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55418863507 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0410199773 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0739392999539 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409788617434 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360591435148 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0379030332687 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288875359778 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.