Dear Ms Brown,
I would like to thank you for the opportunity to be a part of your organization. I was offered the project manager position in your company and was supposed to join on 1 August. However, a problem has arisen and it forces me to delay my joining for a week than initially planned.
Yesterday, I was waiting at the crossroad. During this period, a car was suspected of malfunctioning and crashed into the crowd waiting. Unfortunately, I was knocked down by a car because I couldn’t avoid it in time. After a doctor’s closer examination, it was found that I had only broken the left leg. The doctor said that I need to take a rest for around two weeks. Considering this, I would request you to delay my joining for a week.
I sincerely apologies for not being able to join the job as promised. I am very much keen to join your company.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...ou to delay my joining for a week. I sincerely apologies for not being able to join the job as p...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...very much keen to join your company. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Chris Wong
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54970760234 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79864736463 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654970760234 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7150240747 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.8461538462 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1538461538 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193139297074 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681163642551 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637363977646 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118696772657 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456910980396 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.