You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter– Describe your future wife/husband.– What will happen at the wedding?– Why do you want to invite him/her?

Dear Bob,

I hope you are fine. I am writing to invite you in my wedding ceremony which will take place in my birth country Tirana after two months.

The woman that i am getting married is a tall, beautiful young lady in her middle twenties. I met her at a party that was organised by our common friends and from there started a great friendship which than later became a serious relationship.
I was amazed as we share the same passions for running, and she also is a great cooker.

The marriage ceremony will be a fun organised event. First there will be the maiden dance during which the bride will dance will some maidens. At some point a famous pop singer will get the show, everyone will be surprised. This activity is followed by a toast and the cutting of the cake, after which everybody is given food to eat.

I am inviting you to this event so you can witness our culture and can compare it with your own. You will have the opportunity to visit some nice sites here. There are several locations here that i am sure you would love, but i will keep it secret till you arrive.

Eagerly awaiting your prompt reply,

See you soon,
Andi

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
...ana after two months. The woman that i am getting married is a tall, beautiful...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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.... There are several locations here that i am sure you would love, but i will keep...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...here that i am sure you would love, but i will keep it secret till you arrive. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45539906103 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22517382063 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9259440983 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261012624114 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834462951097 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053861475956 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109974601012 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623123884924 0.0580467560999 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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