Dear Sam,
I am writing this letter to request you that can you please look after my house because I will be going to Bali with my family on a vacation this summer. Fortunately, I feel very relaxed that you are around to take care of my home in absence of me.
I am going on a family vacation to Bali from 1st Aug to 15th Aug. You know that recently I have done some reconstruction in house in which a small garden and a car garage have in the front of my house. Due to this, the entrance to my house is now from the front of the garden.
I would like to request you to take care of a couple of things which includes water the garden, I have installed water sprinklers. If you could just turn them on everyday in the evening while coming back from office then it would be helpful. In addition, could you feed my dog each day; I will be leaving my dog at the top floor of the house.
I would like to thank you for this help. In case of any emergencies, feel free to contact me on my mobile +91 99966622 or mail me at: abc@xyz.com
Best Regards,
Kaustubh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...den, I have installed water sprinklers. If you could just turn them on everyday in...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...inklers. If you could just turn them on everyday in the evening while coming back from o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, while, i feel, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11961722488 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27421255924 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564593301435 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.3990112856 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182284861662 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746351548898 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576555858912 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114644001866 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592039656144 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.62 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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