Dear Selin,
Thank you for taking care of John while I am far away for a business meeting. I let you know some issues which will be beneficial for you during this time.
First of all, he is a vegetarian consequently he does not consume any meat or chicken but he likes eating fish. He also likes consuming fruits such as bananas and apples to stay healthy. Moreover, he drinks tomato soup frequently which I find very beneficial for him.
Secondly, he is addicted to books and he cannot fall asleep without a bedtime reading. Drawing potrays is also his hobby and I hope he will draw yours as a gift. Further and more importantly, he can attend swimming race which will be held on 20st of June. Please donot forget to take photographs of him.
Finally, my flight is on 22nd of June and if there are not any delays, I will have been here until 5 pm. I hope you will have enjoyable time togerher.
Thank you once again and if you need anything else, please send me messages which I will check regularly.
Best wishes,
Mary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l check regularly. Best wishes, Mary
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50793650794 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35036198279 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677248677249 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8115610994 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5384615385 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 4.34317383033 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12614171063 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451250053058 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376695037672 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718434984817 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255751988343 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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