Hi Ryan,
It's only been 45 days since we last met but it feels like a very long time. I hope your last month visit to London went well. Anyway, I wanted to let you know about a cooking course which I came across recently and inquire about your availability for the same.
The course I am writing about today will be conducted by the professional chef Mr. Gordon Ramsay. The classes will be held each day from 5 PM to 7 PM starting next Monday, at the Duncan hall. Also, the material will be provided by the organizers at a free of cost.
As you may already know, Mr. Ramsay is a reputed cook all around the world and I think it is a privilege to get a chance to acquire knowledge from such a legend. Moreover, being an avid fan of his recipes for Mediterranean food, you shouldn’t be missing this event. So, let’s try to meet at my place this weekend to talk more about this event, and plan about our daily commute.
Let me know what you think about this. Also, share the photos of your London trip.
See you soon,
Jonathon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, may, moreover, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37244897959 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33949017645 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683673469388 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9592674552 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4166666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227182428385 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823264143055 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346187187813 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128674494515 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123310905239 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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