Dear Sir or Mam,
My name is Shiva and I am 21 years old. Presently, I am pursuing my last year of bachelors in physical education. I am writing to you to inquire about any part time earning opportunities in your prestigious club, which I could perform during semester holidays.
I have been playing football from last 10 years. During my school days, I was the leader of my team and lead them to various trophies in different tournaments. Our numero uno was when we were selected for the national level and also got a chance to compete with the best team in our country. Besides this, I am mentoring my college team of first year and my school alumni. During my tenure, they finished runners up in the recent inter college sports event.
My vacations will start by end of this month and I can join you from the first day of approaching month. We can meet in person as per your convenience for further discussion. For reference, I am enclosing some newspaper cuttings, highlighting my performances. Till the time I am there, you need not to worry about your club.
I am looking forward to be a part of your club.
Yours faithfully
Hary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... am writing to you to inquire about any part time earning opportunities in your prestigio...
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Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worry'?
Suggestion: worry
... Till the time I am there, you need not to worry about your club. I am looking forwar...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to being'.
Suggestion: to being
...bout your club. I am looking forward to be a part of your club. Yours faithfull...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6067961165 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67265965359 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640776699029 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5235393561 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7857142857 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172890752814 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641860743291 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766323311058 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125987202253 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593378946254 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.