Dear Sir / Madam,
I am Sudheerkumar Motakala and an Indian national. I am currently studying “Advanced Programming Skills in Computers” at the University of Cambridge. It is a two years long course and I am legally eligible to work for a part-time job (My visa and conditions are enclosed on my passport).
I am writing this to get to know more details on available part time jobs in your agency. I am looking for a Computer Programmer or a Software Programmer job. Having a job in the computer sector would also help me to achieve good grades in my course. My classes start at 8 AM in the morning and will continue until noon. Considering my schedule, I can work in afternoon timings and weekends.
I do have experience in the IT field and in my previous jobs; I have helped other teams to complete the projects. My recent project was with the University of Cambridge and I worked for the project to streamline the attendance system for students. I have skills in different programming languages like JAVA, .NET and in Data Analytics.
I am looking forward to hearing from soon.
Yours faithfully
Sudheerkumar Motakalta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...o get to know more details on available part time jobs in your agency. I am looking for a...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'AM'.
Suggestion: AM
...des in my course. My classes start at 8 AM in the morning and will continue until noon. Consideri...
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Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...and weekends. I do have experience in the IT field and in my previous jobs; I have h...
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Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
...kends. I do have experience in the IT field and in my previous jobs; I have helped ...
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Line 4, column 309, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...fferent programming languages like JAVA, .NET and in Data Analytics. I am looking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8358974359 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07701285691 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1768733902 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5384615385 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182252446002 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645339287484 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499176189938 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793714295577 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604564411793 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.