Dear Sir,
I am John and I am looking for a part-time job and came across your agency on the internet. Your agency has got a good rating and also suggested by one of my friends. I am pursuing my post graduation in computer science.
I am capable of teaching the programming languages and have a pre-defined knowledge on the hardware part of the computers. I am interested in taking such a job if any in the town. I also process 2 years of experience in the teaching area and also gained immense knowledge on the edge cutting technologies. I also develop web applications and have a website of my own.
I would like you to help me out to find a suitable job, I am also looking at the time flexibility aspect due to the variances in college timings. I enclosing my resume which depicts my experiences along with this letter. I would like you to have a glimpse at my resume and hope you find it interesting as well.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Yours faithfully,
John Weber
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n taking such a job if any in the town. I also process 2 years of experience in t...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ledge on the edge cutting technologies. I also develop web applications and have ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ations and have a website of my own. I would like you to help me out to find a...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ue to the variances in college timings. I enclosing my resume which depicts my ex...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...ue to the variances in college timings. I enclosing my resume which depicts my ex...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my experiences along with this letter. I would like you to have a glimpse at my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52197802198 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80237555997 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4402322125 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8181818182 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255385559648 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903277477643 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751553713691 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150742110296 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740369065807 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.