Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to share my experience with regard to recent dine-out we had at your restaurant with our company colleagues. As you know, we are frequent visitors to your dining house, and also you offer us food with marginal profit due to the continuous patronage of business from our establishment.
Last week, on 15th September, on occasion of teammate birthday celebrations, we visited your restaurant and ordered a wide variety of dishes from the available menu. Although all items were found appealing visually, it was commented by all our workmates that food was utterly salty and it was unpalatable. In view of not disrupting the hotel reputation, we remained calm and the issue was not further escalated to any of your supervisors.
By considering the above unpleasant experience, I ought to make an agreeable suggestion. I request you to implement a strategy to allow customization of the cuisine as per customers' desire. This idea was found successful across some restaurants in Western countries. Hence, I thoroughly insist you, bring alive this option to your patrons with immediate effect for a sovereign experience.
I hope you consider my proposal and look forward to implementing to taste as our inclination.
Yours faithfully,
Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, so, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24757281553 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08571809163 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68932038835 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1875372308 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2727272727 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174603358431 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607590964869 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309241361787 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983576348633 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314036095869 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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