You are planning a two weeks vacation, and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In this letter,
Tell your neighbor that you are going away
Ask you neighbor totake care of your house for you
Explain what tasks you would like your neighbor to do.
Dear smith,
Hello!!! I hope this letter find you in best of your health and spirit. As we are sharing a good neighborhood, I write this letter because I need your support. I want to inform you that I am going on vacation for 2 weeks with my family.
I just request you to please take care of my house for this days. Keep eye on visitors and postmen.i handed over my house keys to one of my friend, joy. He will also visit the place on alternate days.
I want your co-operation as one of my important courier will come in between this two weeks. So please collect that on behalf of me. And if you find something unusual please do call me or call to joy (9998886661) immediately, so he will come as soon as possible.
Hope to hearing from you soon , so I can do my adjustment accordingly.
Your’s neighbor,
Trupti bhanderi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...you to please take care of my house for this days. Keep eye on visitors and postmen....
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... days. Keep eye on visitors and postmen.i handed over my house keys to one of my ...
^
Line 8, column 30, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ssible. Hope to hearing from you soon , so I can do my adjustment accordingly. ...
^^
Line 10, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt accordingly. Your's neighbor, Trupti bhanderi.
^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our's neighbor, Trupti bhanderi.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43870967742 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59217802562 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632258064516 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7843592374 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.5454545455 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344997356973 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125022484945 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093165087671 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201740482652 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105763899696 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.