You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Sir,
I am writing you to consider some off time work for two weeks.As I am doing a course as correspondence which requires some time to complete and to submit .It is becoming difficult to manage work and thesis parallelly. For that i need some time off to finish my qualification.
After coming back to job again i would work for extra hours and also effort on weekends to complete my tasks also come early to work.I know my unavaiIability make you inconvenience.I have informed my situation to my colleagues. In my absence both of my team members will do my tasks.I will be updating you my work through mails and will attend meetings if it is much important.
The studies I want to complete will also help our latest project we are implementing. That is issues related to compare two similar types of software to know which is more efficient.This new course will make us to solve it easily by comparing them with latest methods easily so that one can use the most efficient software for their usage.
Thanking you in advance. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your Sincerely,
Divya.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing you to consider some off ti...
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...nsider some off time work for two weeks.As I am doing a course as correspondence w...
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...ires some time to complete and to submit .It is becoming difficult to manage work ...
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Suggestion: It
...es some time to complete and to submit .It is becoming difficult to manage work an...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ge work and thesis parallelly. For that i need some time off to finish my qualifi...
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...tion. After coming back to job again i would work for extra hours and also eff...
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...mplete my tasks also come early to work.I know my unavaiIability make you inconve...
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...y unavaiIability make you inconvenience.I have informed my situation to my collea...
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...oth of my team members will do my tasks.I will be updating you my work through ma...
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Suggestion: This
...oftware to know which is more efficient.This new course will make us to solve it eas...
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Suggestion: with the latest
...us to solve it easily by comparing them with latest methods easily so that one can use the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you soon. Your Sincerely, Divya.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71282051282 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7795912555 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.3823801235 44.8134815571 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.111111111 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355426682175 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149352522495 0.0766984524023 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106283817091 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202153758597 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14680453422 0.0580467560999 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.